Show Don’t Tell

Show don't tell. This is a common mantra for script writers. It's not a bad one either. In fact, it's a rocking good one. "I'm watching this movie/TV show/play, so show me what happens don't tell me!" We - the audience - want to see the conflict. So Show-don't-tell is an admonition against blatant exposition [...]

The Intensity of the Want

“The thing the character wants need not be violent or spectacular; it is the intensity of the wanting that counts.” Writing Fiction: A Guide to Narrative Craft, by Janet Burroway. What a great, simple observation about story telling that gets right to the core of things. And this intensity of the wanting applies to both [...]

Margaret The Maid The Son

My new play! A dark comedy about a wealthy woman who calls I.C.E. to have her longtime maid deported in an attempt to keep a family secret from coming out. Come hear wonderful actors read it. Laugh, cry, get angry. I'll be there to get your feedback. Open this blog post for TICKETS Sunday, December [...]